Good Grief!
Another sleepless night. Another weird song/poem. This one is inspired by my writer’s block (read prev. post). Anyway, here’s the stuff I wrote -
In love with a girl I’ve never known,
Captivated by a smile I’ve never seen,
Crazy over kisses I’ve never felt
Don’t know how it happened,
but fiction blurred with reality.
I ache to write about her,
but I can’t find the words to describe her.
Never thought I’d fall in love,
And yet, here I am,
irrevocably in love with someone who doesn’t exist.
Close my eyes in the dark of my room,
I can almost feel her lips on mine,
Shivers run down my spine.
Spend every moment tortured by a memory that never was.
How can it be I wonder -
How can a love so false feel so true?
That’s about it. Can’t believe I’m so hung up over this story. I’m not even writing about something I’ve gone through but I still feel connected to it.
P.S. – Let me clarify, I’m not love with some random girl in reality. Too lazy to love.
November 9, 2011 at 01:06
This might be the greatest post on the net!
May 24, 2010 at 18:10
best poem ever dude…loved it loved it loved it….u should know by now dat m limited in my words derfore this is all u get neways dude u n pvr need a life plotting against ur brother….shiiii shiiiii
May 28, 2010 at 00:30
we’re not plotting against my brother ok. i’m just stating facts that’s all. and thankoo for liking my poem. would’ve kicked you otherwise.
May 24, 2010 at 14:49
Awwwww! I wuff you too!
May 28, 2010 at 00:30
I’m a very wuffable person.
May 22, 2010 at 16:07
I DO. *Crying cause i’m a sympathetic crier*
May 22, 2010 at 16:17
I wuff you!
May 22, 2010 at 16:03
True that! We save lives. Not sto-opid doctors.
May 22, 2010 at 16:04
You understand me. *choking back tears of joy*
May 22, 2010 at 15:54
True. After all, he is just a working doctor.
May 22, 2010 at 16:00
Working doctor pales in comparison to wannabe student.
May 22, 2010 at 15:49
You bum! Keep taking advantage of your awesome brother. I’m proud of you.
I’m sure it’ll work on him.
May 22, 2010 at 15:52
He got himself a Blackberry. Its only fair if I have one too.
May 22, 2010 at 15:43
You’ll be able to SEE THE LIGHT.
May 22, 2010 at 15:47
Hahaha! That is so totally happening.
May 22, 2010 at 15:43
I think it’ll be much better once the stupid entrance tests get over.
May 22, 2010 at 15:45
I agree but then I’ll have added tension of running around to get my documents in order. I’m so busy, I might need a Blackberry (that’s the line I’m planning to use on my brother.)
May 22, 2010 at 12:13
Dude! This is really awesome!!!!
May 22, 2010 at 15:24
Thanks yaar! Still in writer’s block phase though. Sad.
May 20, 2010 at 18:39
Falling in love with you dream woman may make it difficult to find a comparable love
…enjoyed your poem.
May 21, 2010 at 20:51
thanks! (i really suck at the whole replying to comments thing. hope you don’t mind)
May 20, 2010 at 17:24
It’s AOK to feel the joy and wonder (and poetry) of this
too fun, thanx for sharing
keep on
May 21, 2010 at 20:50
thanks for the support!
May 20, 2010 at 15:40
i looooove this one…its juss so u…and i wouldn’t be surprised if u fall in love with a fictional character… hehe
May 21, 2010 at 20:56
thankoo..me loves it too..